Friday, January 9, 2015

Wrong Gate the Train Station (Two Versions)

I created the top caption first, but then I decided to pull back and show a bit more of the surroundings to make it clearer that the background was a train. On one hand, I like the top image better because you can see her more clearly. On the other hand, I prefer the second image because it does a better job of setting the scene. What do you think?


  1. Both look good and it is hard to choose. A most lovely Lady and she was the first thing I zeroed in on. Either/or. You have done a beautiful caption on both.

  2. I think the first one is better. The windows of the train and the tracks should be enough to make it clear, that it is a train in the background.

    1. I agree with this, windows and train should be enough to make that it is a train and the model looks a bit better in the first one.

  3. I think I agree although there's something I like about the second one... I think it's the way it makes it more obvious that she is standing there on the platform for all to see (i.e. the thrill of exposure). And, wow, what a sight :)


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